Writing Prompt
People say I am weird and funny. My friends say that I am easy-going, creative, artistic, and fun. My family says that I am spontaneous, smart, loud, but also shy and quiet around people I don’t know. I think I am weird, klutzy, a good friend, but also forgetful about things. People say I am dorky and nerdy, but that is okay. What they say is true because I am those things and I have those traits. I would say that the only thing missing about this picture is that I am shy and reserved at first. When I first meet people, I am quiet and don’t talk that much. But when I get warmed up to people, I start to be myself.
Critiques
Strengths: well structured, clear voice, nice drawings
Improvements: none
Rate: 8
Improvements: none
Rate: 8
Strengths: Used pictures of him and his work.
Improvements: Talk more about success.
Rate: 6
Improvements: Talk more about success.
Rate: 6